CAEC Writing Preparation Course: Voice, audience, tone and word choice

1. Vraag 1 van 16

   In writing, who is the 'audience'?

   • AThe people you are writing for
   • BThe person who wrote the prompt
   • COnly your friends
   • DThe title of your essay
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: A. The people you are writing for

   Knowing your audience helps you choose the right tone and words (outcome 2.1).

2. Vraag 2 van 16

   You are writing to your town council. Which tone is most appropriate?

   • AVery casual, like a text to a friend
   • BAngry and sarcastic
   • CRespectful, confident and formal
   • DUnsure and apologetic
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: C. Respectful, confident and formal

   A formal, respectful and confident tone suits officials you want to persuade.

3. Vraag 3 van 16

   Which sentence is too casual for a persuasive essay?

   • AResidents have raised several concerns about the plan.
   • BHonestly, this plan is super sketchy and kinda dumb.
   • CThis plan has serious problems that council should consider.
   • DThe plan may cost more than it saves.
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: B. Honestly, this plan is super sketchy and kinda dumb.

   Slang such as 'super sketchy' and 'kinda dumb' does not suit a formal audience.

4. Vraag 4 van 16

   Which word is more precise than 'good' in: 'The new park would be good for the town'?

   • Apretty good
   • Bnice
   • Cokay
   • Dbeneficial
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: D. beneficial

   'Beneficial' says exactly what you mean: it brings benefits. Precise diction creates a clearer voice.

5. Vraag 5 van 16

   Which sentence sounds the most confident?

   • AI guess library hours are something, I don't know.
   • BLibrary hours might or might not need changing.
   • CI believe the town should extend library hours.
   • DI kind of think maybe the town could possibly extend library hours.
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: C. I believe the town should extend library hours.

   Hedging words like 'kind of', 'maybe' and 'possibly' weaken a persuasive voice.

6. Vraag 6 van 16

   Which sentence disagrees respectfully?

   • AOnly selfish people would ever vote against building this new park.
   • BAnyone who worries about noise is just being ridiculous and selfish.
   • CPeople who complain about park noise should simply move somewhere else.
   • DSome residents worry about noise, but the park would close at 9 p.m.
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: D. Some residents worry about noise, but the park would close at 9 p.m.

   You persuade more readers when you answer their concerns politely instead of insulting them.

7. Vraag 7 van 16

   Which wording says the same thing as 'due to the fact that' in the fewest words?

   • Aon account of the fact that
   • Bin light of the fact that
   • Cbecause
   • Dowing to the fact that
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: C. because

   'Because' says the same thing in one word. Cutting extra words makes writing clearer.

8. Vraag 8 van 16

   What is a rhetorical question?

   • AA question that can only be placed in the essay's title
   • BA question that the scorer must answer in writing after the test
   • CA question asked for effect, to make the reader think, not to get an answer
   • DA trick question that has no correct answer at all
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: C. A question asked for effect, to make the reader think, not to get an answer

   For example, 'Who would not want safer streets?' A rhetorical question can make a point strongly if used sparingly.

9. Vraag 9 van 16

   What is 'voice' in writing?

   • AThe font and text size that you use on the computer
   • BThe writer's personality, shown through word choice and style
   • CThe total number of words that the essay contains
   • DHow loudly the essay would sound if it were read aloud
   Toon antwoord

   Antwoord: B. The writer's personality, shown through word choice and style

   Outcome 2.2 asks you to use diction and stylistic choices to create voice.

10. Vraag 10 van 16

    Which sentence uses a strong, exact verb?

    • AThe new schedule will improve bus service.
    • BThe new schedule will make bus service better.
    • CThe new schedule will have an effect on bus service in a way.
    • DThe new schedule will do things for bus service.
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: A. The new schedule will improve bus service.

    'Improve' is a single strong verb. The others use weak verbs like 'make', 'do' or 'have' with extra words.

11. Vraag 11 van 16

    Which sentence avoids a cliché?

    • AWhen it comes to recycling, it is what it is, and we all know that.
    • BRecycling saves the town money and keeps waste out of the landfill.
    • CRecycling is the best thing since sliced bread, and that is just a fact.
    • DAt the end of the day, recycling is a win-win for everybody in town.
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: B. Recycling saves the town money and keeps waste out of the landfill.

    Clichés are tired, overused phrases. Plain, specific words make a clearer argument.

12. Vraag 12 van 16

    Why can exaggeration, such as 'This is the worst idea in human history,' weaken your essay?

    • AReaders stop trusting a writer who overstates
    • BIt makes the essay too short to earn points
    • CIt always turns the sentence into a fragment
    • DIt always counts as a spelling error
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: A. Readers stop trusting a writer who overstates

    Overstated claims sound emotional rather than reasoned, so the reader may doubt the rest of your argument.

13. Vraag 13 van 16

    Which sentence uses an appeal to emotion that suits a persuasive essay?

    • APicture a child waiting in the dark at a bus stop with no shelter from the wind.
    • BYou are a bad person if you disagree with building more bus shelters.
    • CBus shelters can be found in many places across Canada and the world.
    • DBus shelters are usually made of glass and metal, with a bench inside.
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: A. Picture a child waiting in the dark at a bus stop with no shelter from the wind.

    A vivid, fair picture helps the reader feel why the issue matters, without insulting anyone.

14. Vraag 14 van 16

    A writer uses the word 'important' five times in one paragraph. What is the best fix?

    • AReplace some uses with more exact words such as 'essential' or 'urgent'
    • BUse 'important' even more often, to add emphasis
    • CDelete the whole paragraph and start over from the top
    • DWrite the word 'important' in capital letters each time it appears
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: A. Replace some uses with more exact words such as 'essential' or 'urgent'

    Repeating the same word sounds flat. Varied, precise word choice strengthens voice.

15. Vraag 15 van 16

    A writer switches from 'we' to 'you' to 'one' in the same paragraph. What is the problem?

    • AThe essay sounds far too formal for its audience
    • BEvery sentence in the paragraph becomes a fragment
    • CThe point of view is inconsistent
    • DThere is no problem, because all three words are pronouns
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: C. The point of view is inconsistent

    Keep the same point of view so the reader can follow who you are talking about.

16. Vraag 16 van 16

    Which sentence best suits a letter to a newspaper about a local issue?

    • AMain Street is a street that exists in our neighbourhood, near some shops.
    • BI don't really care that much, but maybe someone should look at Main Street.
    • COur neighbourhood needs a crosswalk on Main Street before someone is hurt.
    • Dlol main st is a total mess rn, somebody pls fix it before it gets worse!!
    Toon antwoord

    Antwoord: C. Our neighbourhood needs a crosswalk on Main Street before someone is hurt.

    It is clear, serious and urgent. The others are too casual, too flat or not persuasive.

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