Lesson 1: The Writing test, scoring and a 75-minute plan
The Canadian Adult Education Credential (CAEC) is a high school equivalency for adults. There are five tests: Reading, Writing, Mathematics, Science and Social Studies. You must pass all five, or meet Prior Learning Assessment Recognition (PLAR) rules for some. Each province or territory decides who can take the tests.
The Writing test at a glance
| What | Details |
|---|---|
| Task | One persuasive writing task |
| Durata | 75 minutes |
| Lingue | English or French |
| Formato | On computer, with a paper option, at a testing centre |
| Scoring | Scored by people, out of 9 points |
| Results | About 20 business days |
| Soglia di superamento | 55% |
There are no multiple-choice questions on the Writing test. You write one essay that takes a position on an issue. Our quizzes use multiple choice only to practise the skills scorers look for.
How your essay is scored
Each essay is scored independently by at least two people from the CAEC testing service. They use a rubric with three categories. Each is worth 3 points, one third of the mark:
| Categoria | What scorers look for (in our words) |
|---|---|
| Position and support | You understand the issue and take a clear position (agree or disagree). Your arguments are clear and relevant, and your support is connected to them. |
| Voice and presentation | Your tone suits the audience. Your word choice creates a clear voice. Your ideas follow a logical order and end with a clear closing. |
| Conventions, mechanics and syntax | You use words correctly. Grammar, spelling and punctuation are under control. Your sentences are clear and varied. |
If the two scores are within 2 points, they are averaged. If they are 3 or more points apart, a third person scores the essay, and the two highest scores are averaged.
Pass mark, results and retakes
| Score | Livello | Result |
|---|---|---|
| 80–100% | Exceeds minimum standard | Pass |
| 55–79% | Meets minimum standard | Pass |
| 40–54% | Approaching minimum standard | Retake |
| 0–39% | Does not meet minimum standard | Retake |
You may write a subject test once per calendar month and up to 3 times per calendar year. You cannot rewrite a test you have passed. Because Writing is not machine scored, you can ask for a rescore within 90 days of getting your results (a fee applies). The rescored result is final, even if it is lower.
A 75-minute plan
The official pages do not set a word count. Most strong essays have an introduction, two or three body paragraphs and a conclusion. This plan leaves time for every step:
| Minutes | Step |
|---|---|
| 0–10 | Read the prompt twice. Decide your position. Jot down two or three reasons and an example for each. |
| 10–60 | Write the introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion. |
| 60–75 | Revise for clear ideas, then proofread for spelling, punctuation and grammar. |
Quiz tematico 1: The Writing test, scoring and a 75-minute plan
Lesson 2: Position and support
A persuasive essay starts with an issue: a question people disagree about, such as whether a town should build a skate park. Your job is to take a position (agree or disagree) and convince the reader.
The thesis statement
Your thesis is one or two sentences in the introduction that state your position. A strong thesis also names your main reasons. A simple pattern is position + because + reasons.
- Weak: 'In this essay, I will talk about skate parks.' (no position)
- Weak: 'Some people like skate parks and some do not.' (no side)
- Strong: 'Our town should build a skate park because it would give young people a safe place to be active.'
If you see good points on both sides, choose the side you can support best. You can still mention the other side later.
Reasons and support
Each argument is a reason why your position is right. In 75 minutes, two or three well-supported reasons work better than a long list. Avoid circular reasons, which only repeat the position: 'Uniforms are good because having uniforms is good.'
Every reason needs support. Use support you know is true:
| Kind of support | Example |
|---|---|
| Specific example | When my cousin's clinic tried four-day weeks, staff took fewer sick days. |
| Personal experience | Last winter, my bus was late four times in one month. |
| Cause and effect | If the route is cut, seniors without cars cannot get to appointments. |
After each example, add a sentence that explains how it proves your point. Do not invent statistics or quotations. Made-up numbers are inappropriate support and make readers doubt you.
Weak support to avoid
- Absent: a reason with no example or explanation.
- Contradictory: support that works against you, such as arguing for longer library hours and then saying hardly anyone uses the library.
- Overgeneralized: sweeping claims with words like 'everyone', 'nobody', 'always' or 'never'.
- Inappropriate or irrelevant: facts about a different topic, or insults instead of reasons.
Significance and the other side
Show why the issue matters: who is affected and what could happen. Then show the issue is complex by answering an opposing view with a rebuttal that admits the point and explains why your side is still better: 'The garden would cost money at first, but volunteers would do most of the work after the first year.'
Practical exercise: plan an essay (prompt 1)
Prompt: Some employers now offer a four-day work week with longer days. Should more employers offer this choice? Plan your essay in 10 minutes, then compare it with the model answers.
Write a thesis statement.
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Model: 'More employers should offer a four-day work week because it gives workers time to rest and helps businesses keep good staff.' It takes a clear side and names two reasons.
List two or three reasons that support your position.
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Model: (1) Workers get an extra day to rest, see family and go to appointments. (2) Rested workers make fewer mistakes. (3) Employers who offer it can attract and keep staff. Any clear, different reasons are fine.
Give one example for your first reason and explain how it proves the point.
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Model: 'My neighbour, a nurse, moved to four ten-hour shifts. She now books dental visits on her day off instead of leaving work early.' This shows the extra day saves time away from work.
Name one opposing view and answer it.
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Model: 'Some people say ten-hour days are too tiring. However, workers could choose this schedule only if it suits them, and employers could keep five-day weeks for those who prefer them.'
Is this strong support: 'Everyone would love a four-day week'? Why or why not?
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No. 'Everyone' is an overgeneralization, and the sentence gives no example or reason. Replace it with a specific example.
Lesson 3: Organizing a persuasive essay
Scorers look for writing that is organized for persuasion, in a logical order, with a distinct closure:
| Part | Che cosa fa |
|---|---|
| Introduction | Catches interest, gives a little context and states your thesis, often near the end of the paragraph. |
| Body paragraph 1 | First reason, with support and explanation. |
| Body paragraph 2 | Second reason, with support and explanation. |
| Body paragraph 3 | A third reason, or the opposing view and your rebuttal. |
| Conclusion | Restates your position in new words and ends with a final thought or call to action. |
Introductions
Open with a hook: a short scene, a surprising point or a question, such as 'Imagine waiting forty minutes in the snow for a bus that never comes.' Avoid flat openings like 'This essay is about buses.'
Body paragraphs
Each body paragraph covers one main idea. Start with a topic sentence that states it. Then give support, explain it and finish with a sentence that links back to your position. If a paragraph jumps between cost, safety and noise, split it into separate paragraphs. Remove any sentence that does not support the topic sentence.
Transitions
| Purpose | Transitions |
|---|---|
| Add a point | In addition, also, furthermore |
| Show contrast | However, on the other hand, although |
| Give an example | For example, for instance |
| Show a result | Therefore, as a result, so |
| Put in order | First, second, next, finally |
| Conclude | In conclusion, for these reasons |
Conclusions
Restate your position in new words, sum up your reasons briefly and finish with a strong last sentence, such as a call to action. Do not add a new reason, copy your introduction or apologize for mistakes.
Practical exercise: a model essay (prompt 2)
Prompt: Your town has an empty lot downtown. Council must decide whether to turn it into a community garden or a paid parking lot. Take a position and convince council. Write each part yourself, then compare it with the model.
Write the introduction.
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Model: 'Every spring, the empty lot downtown fills with weeds and litter. Council now has a chance to change that. Some residents want a paid parking lot, but a community garden would serve our town far better. Council should choose the garden because it would give families fresh, low-cost food and bring neighbours together.' (Hook, context, thesis.)
Write the first body paragraph.
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Model: 'First, a community garden would help families eat well for less. Fresh vegetables can be expensive, and some families cannot buy them every week. With a garden plot, a family can grow lettuce, beans and tomatoes all summer for the cost of a few packets of seeds. A parking lot cannot put food on anyone's table, but a garden can.'
Write the second body paragraph.
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Model: 'In addition, a garden would bring people together. Gardeners share tools, trade tips and water each other's plots during holidays. Seniors could teach children how to grow food, and newcomers could meet their neighbours. People leave a parking lot as quickly as they can; a garden is a place where people want to stay.'
Write a paragraph that answers the opposing view.
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Model: 'Some people argue that downtown needs more parking for shoppers. This concern is fair, but a parking lot would serve only a few drivers at a time, while a garden would serve families every day. A garden would also draw visitors downtown, and many of them would stop at local shops on the way.'
Write the conclusion.
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Model: 'A parking lot would fill a few spaces, but a community garden would fill many needs. It would feed families and build a stronger community. For these reasons, council should vote yes, so the empty lot can start growing food next spring.' (New words, summary, call to action.)
Lesson 4: Voice, audience, tone and word choice
Voice and presentation is one third of your mark. It covers your tone for the audience, your word choice (diction) and style, and the order of your ideas (Lesson 3). Your voice is your personality on the page, shown through the words and style you choose.
Audience and tone
Your audience is the people you are writing for, such as town council, an employer or newspaper readers. If the prompt names none, write for a thoughtful adult who has not decided. The right tone is usually respectful, confident and fairly formal.
| Too casual, weak or rude | Better for a persuasive essay |
|---|---|
| lol this plan is kinda dumb | This plan has serious problems. |
| I kind of think maybe we could... | I believe the town should... |
| Anyone who disagrees is ridiculous. | Some residents worry about noise, but the park would close at 9 p.m. |
| This is the worst idea in human history. | This idea would cost more than it saves. |
Diction: choosing exact words
- Be precise. Replace vague words like 'good', 'bad' and 'stuff' with exact ones, such as 'beneficial', 'unsafe' or 'supplies'.
- Use strong verbs. 'Improve' is stronger than 'make better'.
- Cut extra words. Write 'because' instead of 'due to the fact that'.
- Avoid clichés such as 'at the end of the day', 'win-win' or 'the best thing since sliced bread'.
- Vary repeated words. If 'important' appears five times, try 'essential', 'urgent' or 'serious'.
- Keep one point of view. Do not switch between 'we', 'you' and 'one' in the same paragraph.
Persuasive techniques
Use these with care, once or twice in an essay:
- Rhetorical question: asked for effect, not for an answer. 'Who would not want safer streets?'
- Appeal to emotion: a fair, vivid picture. 'Picture a child waiting in the dark at a bus stop with no shelter.'
Exaggeration and insults have the opposite effect. Readers stop trusting a writer who overstates or attacks people.
Practical exercise: fix the tone
You are writing to your town council about a plan to close the outdoor rink. Rewrite each sentence so it suits the audience.
Closing the rink is a super dumb move, guys.
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Model: 'Closing the rink would be a mistake for our community.' It removes slang and speaks to council respectfully.
I guess maybe the rink kind of matters to some people?
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Model: 'The rink matters to many families in our town.' It is confident, with no hedging words.
Due to the fact that the rink is free, it is good for stuff like exercise.
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Model: 'Because the rink is free, it gives everyone a place to exercise in winter.' It is shorter and more precise.
Whoever came up with this plan obviously hates kids.
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Model: 'I understand that the town wants to save money, but the rink is one of the few free winter activities for children.' It is respectful and answers the other side.
Lesson 5: Sentence structure and flow
The third scoring category includes control of sentence structure and flow. Errors or too little variety can make your meaning unclear.
Complete sentences and fragments
A complete sentence has a subject, a verb and a complete thought: 'The council approved the plan.' A fragment is missing one of these. Fragments often start with words like 'because', 'although', 'when' or 'which'.
- Fragment: 'Because parking downtown is expensive.'
- Fixed: 'Many people take the bus because parking downtown is expensive.'
Run-ons and comma splices
A run-on joins two sentences with no punctuation: 'The library is busy every evening students need more space.' A comma splice joins them with only a comma: 'The rink is old, it needs a new roof.' You can fix either one in four ways:
- Use a period: 'The rink is old. It needs a new roof.'
- Use a comma and a joining word (and, but, or, so, yet): 'The rink is old, so it needs a new roof.'
- Use a semicolon between two complete, related sentences: 'The rink is old; it needs a new roof.'
- Make one part dependent: 'Because the rink is old, it needs a new roof.'
Joining ideas
| Joining words | Shows | Example |
|---|---|---|
| but, however, although | Contrast | Although the plan costs more at first, it will save money. |
| so, therefore | Result | The road is narrow, so trucks slow down. |
| because, since | Reason | Students stay late because the library is quiet. |
| and, also, in addition | Addition | The pool is closed, and the gym is open. |
Parallel structure
Items in a list should have the same form: 'The program helps students read, write and solve problems', not 'read, writing and to solve problems'.
Modifiers
Put a describing phrase next to the word it describes. 'The clerk sold a bike to the woman with a flat tire' sounds as if the woman has the flat tire; write 'The clerk sold the woman a bike with a flat tire.' A dangling modifier describes something that is not in the sentence: 'Walking to work, the rain soaked my shoes' (the rain was not walking). Fix it: 'While I was walking to work, the rain soaked my shoes.'
Variety, clarity and active voice
Mix short and long sentences, and combine choppy ones: 'The bridge is old. It is narrow. Trucks use it every day' becomes 'Trucks use the old, narrow bridge every day.' Prefer the active voice, where the subject does the action ('The council approved the budget'), to the passive ('The budget was approved by the council'). Keep words in a natural order and cut rambling.
Practical exercise: edit sentences from a draft
These sentences come from a draft essay about longer library hours. Name the problem and rewrite each sentence correctly.
The library closes at 6 p.m. many students work until 5.
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Run-on. 'The library closes at 6 p.m., but many students work until 5.' A period between the two sentences also works.
Because students need a quiet place to study.
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Fragment. 'The library should stay open later because students need a quiet place to study.'
Longer hours would help students study, people looking for jobs, and to borrow books.
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Not parallel. 'Longer hours would help students study, job seekers look for work and families borrow books.'
Arriving after work, the doors were already locked.
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Dangling modifier. 'Arriving after work, I found the doors already locked.'
The hours are short, people are frustrated.
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Comma splice. 'The hours are short, so people are frustrated.'
Lesson 6: Usage, grammar, spelling and punctuation
The rubric checks whether words and expressions are used correctly and whether grammar, spelling and punctuation are under control. It names subject-verb agreement, spelling and punctuation as examples.
Agreement, verbs and pronouns
- Find the real subject: 'The list of new rules is posted.' The words 'of new rules' do not change the subject.
- 'Each', 'every', 'everyone' and 'nobody' are singular: 'Each of the volunteers wears a vest.'
- Keep the same tense for actions at the same time: 'Last year, the town planted trees and built a playground.'
- Learn irregular verbs: write, wrote, has written; go, went, has gone; see, saw, has seen.
- After words like 'to', 'for' and 'with', use me, him, her, us or them: 'The manager gave the keys to Maria and me.' Test it by removing the other person.
Commonly confused words
| Words | Significato | Example |
|---|---|---|
| their / there / they're | belongs to them / a place / they are | They're leaving their tools over there. |
| its / it's | belongs to it / it is | It's time the town fixed its roads. |
| affect / effect | to influence (verb) / a result (noun) | The hours affect students; the effect is clear. |
| than / then | compares / tells when | Walking is cheaper than driving. Then it snowed. |
| accept / except | to receive or agree to / not including | We accept all ages, except children under 5. |
| fewer / less | things you can count / amounts you cannot count | Fewer cars mean less noise. |
Punctuation and capitals
- Apostrophes: for one owner, add 's (the student's locker). For a plural ending in s, add only ' (the students' lockers). Do not use apostrophes for simple plurals.
- Comma after an introductory phrase: 'After the meeting, residents signed the petition.'
- Commas around extra information: 'My neighbour, who drives a city truck, clears our street first.'
- Comma before a joining word that links two complete sentences: 'The pool is closed, and the gym is open.'
- Capitals: the first word of a sentence, names of people and places, days, months and holidays: 'In July, we drove from Calgary to Lake Louise.' Seasons such as 'spring' take no capital.
Spelling
Learn words that are often misspelled: necessary, government, definitely, receive and separate. Use one spelling system all the way through.
Final checklist
- I took a clear position, and my thesis is in the introduction.
- Each body paragraph has a topic sentence, support and an explanation.
- I answered at least one opposing view.
- I used transitions, and my ideas follow a logical order.
- My conclusion restates my position and ends with a strong final thought.
- My tone suits the audience, with no slang, insults or exaggeration.
- Every sentence is complete, with no run-ons or comma splices.
- I checked agreement, verb tense, confused words, apostrophes, commas, capitals and spelling.
Practical exercise: timed practice (prompt 3)
Prompt: Some people think high schools should start classes later in the morning. Do you agree or disagree? Set a timer for 75 minutes, write your essay, check it with the list above, then compare it with these model parts.
Make a 10-minute plan.
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Model outline: Thesis (start later: more alert, safer). Reason 1: rested students learn more. Reason 2: fewer students travel in the dark in winter. Other side: jobs and sports; answer: those schedules can shift too. Closing: ask the board to try it for one year.
Write the introduction.
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Model: 'At 7:30 on a January morning, many teenagers stand at a dark bus stop, half asleep. When first class begins, they are present but not ready to learn. High schools should start classes later in the morning because students would be more alert in class and safer on the way to school.'
Write the conclusion.
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Model: 'A later start is a small change with large benefits. Students would arrive rested and ready, and fewer of them would wait in the dark. The school board should try a later start for one year and see the difference for itself.'
Proofread this sentence from a draft: 'Its clear that student's learn better when there rested.'
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'It's clear that students learn better when they're rested.' Three fixes: It's (it is), students (a plural, so no apostrophe) and they're (they are).
Fonti
- Government of Alberta: Canadian Adult Education Credential (CAEC)
- Government of Alberta: How to earn your CAEC
- CAEC Test Outcomes and Evaluation Plan by Subject (PDF)
- CAEC Test Administration Guide (PDF)
- Government of Newfoundland and Labrador: CAEC – High School Equivalency
- TVO ILC (Ontario): Canadian Adult Education Credential